My Sun and My Stars
an exercise in acrostic poetry
Dear reader…
I have started my self-led (imposed?) MFA in Poetry. I am currently studying The Poet’s Companion: A Guide to the Pleasures of Writing Poetry by Kim Addonizio and Dorianne Laux as well as A Little Book on Form: An Exploration into the Formal Imagination of Poetry (it’s not little) by Robert Hass.
My goal is to study and practice formal poetry. Some forms that I want to experiment with are:
Acrostic
Sestina
Cento
Villanele
Sonnet
I’m not reading the craft books in a linear fashion, but going straight to the forms that most appeal to me.
The first form I decided to write is the acrostic poem. They will continue to be a work in progress, but I also really like them how they are, too.
Nova and Leon are my grandchildren. When I practice tarot, my card for Nova is The Star and the card for Leon is The Sun. If you saw the card and the children side by side, you would understand.
Nova Now that you are here I can tell you how Once, I watched a bee Dance on a Violet and for the first time I knew A tiny surprise is a miracle. Leon Little did I know Your peach-fuzz Ears and fussy toes would launch me into Orbit upon your arrival, whispering a solid prayer: Never a lifetime without you.


I love those poems!!! I love the images you chose; bee and violet; flung into orbit.
I’m gonna add those books to my list! Curious to hear what forms you like. I’ve tried a handful and I just don’t like following rules! 😆